This is great. I love the subtle allusions to Susan/Narnia, and I especially loved this imagery: “The pill, however, remained under her tongue, lodged there, a pearl.” Can’t wait for chapter two!
Eager for the next chapter! I love that you are sharing in this way. Reminds me of when I was a child reading a continued story in one of my dad's outdoor magazines. I couldn't wait for the next month's installment.
I love this, Shawn, and can't wait for the next chapter! I'm currently reading Narnia aloud to my kids for the first time, reliving the story with different eyes, so reading your story was even more meaningful. Your writing also drew me in.
Somewhere I read a very thorough article on organizing journal by category, dating them on the spine, etc. I thought it was written by you. Of all the things I miss, it’s my mind…
This is great. I love the subtle allusions to Susan/Narnia, and I especially loved this imagery: “The pill, however, remained under her tongue, lodged there, a pearl.” Can’t wait for chapter two!
Thanks, Paige!
Beautiful! Can’t wait for chapter 2!
Thank you, Christiana!
Can't wait for the next chapter :-) Excellent read.
Thanks, Linda! Chapter 2 is posted!
Hooked already!
Thanks for reading, Alysa!
You’ve got me hooked. Well done.
Thanks, Ruth!
Ooh I'm riveted!! Such good descriptions! Love this and can't wait for the next chapter!
Thanks, Kym!
I love this! Can't wait for more!
Thank you, Gina!
Loving this. So excited to get to read more of your fiction writing!
Thanks, Amy!
Love it!
Thanks for reading, Mel!
I, too, am bothered by the ending of the Last Battle. I am soooo here for this redemption of Susan! Can't wait to see where you take us. :)
Me, too!
Eager for the next chapter! I love that you are sharing in this way. Reminds me of when I was a child reading a continued story in one of my dad's outdoor magazines. I couldn't wait for the next month's installment.
Thanks for following along, Gina!
I love this, Shawn, and can't wait for the next chapter! I'm currently reading Narnia aloud to my kids for the first time, reliving the story with different eyes, so reading your story was even more meaningful. Your writing also drew me in.
Thanks, Renee! Reading Narnia aloud with kids for the first time is such a special thing.
It was so nice to meet you today. Your shop is beautiful. And Susan’s story—looking forward to the next installment.
So nice to meet you! Thanks for stopping by our shop, and thanks for reading!
Did you write a post about organizing journals? If so, when?
I’m not sure?
Oh, another book you might check out for the shop is Theo of Golden by Allen Levi.
Somewhere I read a very thorough article on organizing journal by category, dating them on the spine, etc. I thought it was written by you. Of all the things I miss, it’s my mind…
That sounds interesting but I don't think it was me! :)
Thank you for letting me know.
Yes! This is the story we’ve all been waiting for!
You're such an encouragement, Courtney.
I’ve missed your fiction! Grateful for this new series.
Very excited about this!!
That means a lot, Lucy. Thank you!
Waiting impatiently for Chapter 2.
:) Thanks, Sheila.